Most students think the path to Band 7+ is paved with big vocabulary.
So they chase:
- Words like ameliorate, individuals, whereas
- Overly complex phrases
- “Academic” tone that feels impressive
And yet — they keep getting Band 6.
Why?
Because they don’t need more vocabulary.
They need more clarity.
Vocabulary Without Clarity = Decoration Without Structure
Let’s compare:
“Individuals must ameliorate their efforts to foster a better societal circumstance.”
❌ Complex words. No clear subject or movement.
“People must work harder to improve society.”
✅ Clear subject → strong verb → clear outcome.
Clarity wins.
Every. Time.
What Is Clarity?
Clarity means:
- One Subject–Verb–Object per sentence (SVO Spine)
- Verbs that carry real energy (High-Precision Verbs)
- Sentences that transmit ideas, not just words (Signal vs Structure)
The Sentence That Shifted a Student’s Mind
Before:
“Due to the issue that is currently being faced by many people, it can be said that society is encountering numerous problems.”
After:
“Many people today struggle with high housing costs, which puts pressure on families and local economies.”
Same meaning. Different world.
Why Vocabulary Still Matters — But Last
Vocabulary is the paint.
Clarity is the architecture.
You don’t need decoration until the structure is strong.
Band 7+ students build clean, then decorate with precision.
Glossary Terms in This Shift:
- SVO Spine — every clear sentence has a subject, verb, and object
- High-Precision Verb — the verb is the engine
- Band Language — natural + accurate > big and awkward
- Signal vs Structure — great ideas fail when they’re buried
Practice Prompt
Take one of your long sentences and ask:
- Who is the subject?
- What is the verb?
- What’s the object?
Then rewrite using that exact order.
You’ll feel the shift — not in your head, but in your body.
That’s how you know your writing just got stronger.


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